Thursday, September 17, 2009

I remebered one but i am not sure if it was right:
"Carla's words were swirling around his head, he could not concerntrate on anything. There were pain and agony, like a knot in his stomache, which keep getting tighter. He tried forgetting it, but it was hopeless.
I am sorry Bradley, but there's no choice,
The knot got tighter,
but we could meet each other again,
and tighter,
I'll meet you this Saturday, we could have lunch together, okay?
and tighter...
That's all I remembered as a good sentence, I thought it was a great one:)

5 comments:

  1. You're tight Giang; that is a super piece of writing? But what makes it so good? Can you explain to us?

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  2. Yeah! Stop it. And again, you really need to shave your hair!

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  3. right* , not "tight"- sorry I can't type!

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